Sky Pup - When the Time Comes

NUR EIN

Sky Pup

When the Time ComesNur Ein VIII

about 13 years agopassed

3:21

Challenge

Use of the sound of gunfire

When The Time Comes
by Sky Pup

I was a young man
Longhaired and free
Not a care in the world

I met a young girl
With darkest hair and eyes so green
And now she is my world

And when the time comes
I'm going to marry my girl
And when that time comes
I'll be on top of the world

But now I'm sitting in a trench
Playing this guitar
And waiting to be sent to the front line

And when the time comes
I'm going to marry my girl
And when that time comes
I'll be on top of the world

glennny

Apr 23, 2013Forum post

This sounds more like a writing session than a finished product.

Paco Del Stinko

Apr 23, 2013Forum post

Interesting concept. Perhaps a visit to the trencehes istead of a stay there might have worked better. Or, take us away, insde the soldier's head, for a bit. Work on your pitch, too.