NUR EIN
Grumpy Mike
This Is Not A TestNur Ein XI
about 10 years agopassed
3:48

Challenge

Tell an origin story

flying through the night
far away from home
nothing to report
as the console radar shows

the same routine
all systems go
until a transmission
from air traffic control

THIS IS NOT A TEST
IT'S AN EMERGENCY

a bogey found
he's not alone
at 8 o'clock
now I'm in the dangerzone

they've got a lock
all systems red
too late to fight
gonna have to run instead

THIS IS NOT A TEST
IT'S AN EMERGENCY

(this is not a badass solo
this is an instrumental bridge)

THIS IS NOT A TEST
IT'S AN EMERGENCY

the seat ejects
and the plane explodes
when i touch the ground
the parachute's still closed ( <--- implying the protagonist just found out he has super-human powers)

THIS IS NOT A TEST
IT'S AN EMERGENCY

noma

Forum post

Composition: 5/10
Lyrics: 8/10
Performance: 8/10
Production: 7/10

Creativity bonus: 1
Challenge bonus: 4

Standard rock song. I like your vocals and everything here, it doesn't particularly stick out from the other songs though. This clearly qualifies as origin story, and it's a cool one, so you get a fat challenge bonus.