Challenge
Two Sides of an Argument
Schadenfreude by NP
I walked away
from your door
knowing you were trapped inside
with a vampire
fangs filled her grin
I just laughed the whole time
Your eyes open wide
Back to the floor
Hands stretched out on the wood
Sargeant, I feel that I should be locked up tight for good
But what you did was nothing criminal
Wrenching joy from life is natural
And though it sounds uncivilized
You'd be surprized
Interesting inunciation of some words. I'm glad you got your entry in and I hope this will encourage you in future that you can scrape together a pretty good song under pressure. It's mainly the vocal that carries this. I reckon you could sleepwalk through the next round but I'm looking forward to you stepping up your game.