NUR EIN
almost 11 years agoeliminated
3:42

Challenge

Question

D D A

Another splash of cologne,
Another night spent away from home
Another night at the bar
Because that’s where the girls are

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A G x3 D
Will they notice my two day shadow?
Can they tell that I haven't showered?
Am I fooling them all with my swagger anyway?

Will they notice my two day shadow?
Can they tell that I haven't showered?
Am I pulling this off like Mick Jagger’s evil twin?

I’m feeling just like Stalone
When I’m on the dance floor
all the ladies gather round
because they like to get down

Will they notice my two day shadow?
Can they tell that I haven't showered?
Am I fooling them all with my swagger anyway?

Will they notice my two day shadow?
Can they tell that I haven't showered?
Am I pulling this off like Mick Jagger’s evil twin?

Bridge: Bm G Em G-A
Two Day Shadow

I’m a wolf on the prowl
Looking for a night owl
I know what’s ahead
another night in a stranger’s bed

Will they notice my two day shadow?
Can they tell that I haven't showered?
Am I fooling them all with my swagger anyway?

Will they notice my two day shadow?
Can they tell that I haven't showered?
Am I pulling this off like Mick Jagger’s evil twin?

Outro: G A D

Chumpy

Forum post

Solid bar synth rock, concept of the dude on the prowl is well executed, and I dig the Jagger / swagger line a lot. The singing is solid, but I feel it could be more varied. The bridge vocals sound great to me and provide some of the vocal variance I'm looking for, but I felt like you missed an opportunity here lyrically. I'm impressed by how well you integrated the arbitrary title and the challenge into your song, which on the surface seems like a no brainer, but is often neglected.