NUR EIN
almost 13 years agoeliminated
2:42

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Collaboration with someone's mom

Paco Del Stinko

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The tabla rhytthm is too up in the mix against the guitar. Yeah, not Production Fight, I know, but distracting. I'd like to hear this more Stonesy I think. Good rock riff, sleaze it up a bit and delivery more vocal scruff on the verses. On the fence as to whether you'll pass the round: Where's the mom?

furrypedro

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I appreciate your effort to go outside the box a little bit with your mix of congas and rock guitar, it's an interesting blend. My main gripe with the song is that it doesn't have much in the way of dynamics, all the sections sound the same, there isn't much sonic development and there isn't enough of a hook to draw me in.