NUR EIN
about 11 years agopassed
2:50

Challenge

Lyrics must include your own name

DuToVa
Name check = Adam (lead singer)

Broken promise, a heart deceived
Adam stumbled, in his greed
Hope is lost, there's a price to pay
Can't return, there's no other way

Broken bridge, and an endless gap
Listened to lies, meant to trap
Working hard, with sweat upon his face
To survive, this must embrace

Standing on the edge, staring off into infinity
Consequence changed life, into this new reality

Standing on the edge, and looking for a better day
Crying out in pain, there has to be another way

(repeat verse 1)

Standing on the edge
Standing on the edge

JonPorobil

Forum post

Not a bad song, but the vocals are pretty badly off key in a lot of spots. I feel bad for not being able to dig any deeper, but the vocals just absolutely kill this for me. I can't get past it. Sorry.