I felt you were playing it a bit safe but the bit Sally sings on (the bridge, whatever you call it) elevates this. I can look past the few 'Look at me! I'm writing a song' phrases in the lyric ('so wait for the key change', 'I'm just a simple accordianist').

An endearing shanty, the spoken word bits are great. Some disorienting transitions.

You had me at "key change" - nice. I like this style a lot more than the spastic-feeling accordion of your previous entry(s). Your sprechansang is unique and not cringey and you should maybe do that more. The chorus could be worked on a little bit.

This sounds like a mixture of Brian Gray & Inverse T. Clown (both SpinTuners). That’s not really a bad thing either. Smart lyrics, accordion, and a little humor. The guest vocalist did pretty well. The section Sally sang sounded great, but it was an odd transition. Her part didn’t even sound like it should be in the same song.