vowlvom
Sourcestructurally I found this more satisfying than your round zero track, it gets right into the action with that driving, funky electric piano and the percussion is really nicely used to lift the choruses (although the shaker is a little bit high in the mix for how much it's used, perhaps). The dog solo is hilarious and the spoken-word section over the bass is a nice change of pace. Lyrics not posted in the thread, but they seem fine as far as I can tell. Fun song!