I actually read your lyrics cause you posted them right before mine, and I think they’re your best so far this year. You have a good take on the challenge, and a cohesive story. Oooh I like those high “haaa haaa haa” vocals in the chorus. This song is like Britney Spears, Peter Gabriel, and Israel Kamakawiwo'ole wrote a country song together.

lovely stuff, this sounds great and I have very few notes. I do feel like the bass is maybe a little overbearing for the general sound of the track but only a little. Otherwise, this is just a pleasure to listen to with lovely harmonies, good lyrics and dreamy guitars.

lovely song. great vocals. sounds very professionally recorded/mixed. another really good one. probably more my speed than the Grumpy Mike & Max Bombast's songs. possibly my #1 song this round. maybe a little soft pop/rock for my taste but so well done. I love the outro.

Sounds nice. Enjoyable chorus and oooohs. I feel like this flows great between sections. Radio ready as it were. Sing along outro…