Challenge
Elements of chiptune/ computer sounds
No Memory - Color Me Confused
*by Lichen Throat (shadow entry)
samples from The Sugarcubes' "Delicious Demon"*
I could never keep track of my money.
I’m only a simple child.
I just try to be witty and funny.
How much debt have I compiled?
*Two men need one money,
But one money need no man.*
You say I owe you, but I’ve got no memory.
Color me confused, but don’t be my enemy.
You can call me Harold, or even Mr. Skimpole,
I’d pay if I could, but it’s not that simple.
Sir, I sense that you may be wealthy;
Can you help me just this time?
I’ll drink to your remaining healthy,
Then I’ll stay through dinnertime.
*Two men need one money,
But one money need no man.*
You say I owe you, but I’ve got no memory.
Color me confused, but don’t be my enemy.
You can call me Harold, or even Mr. Skimpole,
I’d pay if I could, but it’s not that simple.
this feels like one of your most confident vocals, there's some real power to your voice here. Unfortunately still some significant timing issues, but the tone is good and full of feeling. I like the arrangement well enough, you've done a good job fitting in both challenges and titles, but vocals aside this doesn't really grab me like your best stuff does.