NUR EIN
Zack Facco
This Is Not A TestNur Ein XI
about 10 years agopassed
2:00

Challenge

Tell an origin story

Alfred Nobel, namesake of the Nobel Peace Prize
son of Immanuel and Carolina
born among seven siblings in Stockholm Sweden
he developed an early interest in scientific endeavors.
A quick study and keen intellect, Alfred was a pioneer in his fields
and he invented many useful tools in his career
including plywood.
But he is most known for an invention that earned him the nickname
"Merchant of Death" in an erroneous obituary
that was written while he was still alive.
Alfred Nobel invented: TNT

This is not a Test...

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Composition: 2/10
Lyrics: 2/10
Performance: 1/10
Production: 3/10

Creativity bonus: 1
Challenge bonus: 0

Lyric doesn't rhyme, has no recognizable rhythm and is not an "origin story". Sounds like it was copied from some book or whatever. The backing music doesn't help, either. Alfred Nobel's life surely is interesting; this song is not. Sorry, but I don't like this.