So you decided to go for another 3/4 track this round, interesting. I'm impressed at your ability to turn on a completely different style each round and this is perfectly competent. This suffers in the same way alot of these songs do in that they're professional sounding enough but there's nothing memorable. Even if I thought the song was amazing the danger of me singing this to myself in the car or the shower (for example) is pretty much zero.

Your lyrics are great, but I'm afraid this recording doesn't do them justice. Something about this vibe reminds me of The Beatles, but I don't think there's any one particular song you're knocking off, so I don't know why I get that impression from you. I think a strong harmony line could pull this up from "good" to "great" territory.