Good catchy intro, good short lyrical parts w/ a good melody. Nice little synth solo break. Builds up nice… Great vocals. I'm worried about the length, but you're keeping me going... No! Just a fadeout… you tricked me into thinking there would be one final great part to go out with...

slick atmospheric pop, some gorgeous harmonies in there and I like the punchiness of the electronic drums. The string synths fill out the mix really nicely, good stuff.

Congrats on the win! Getting Maniac vibes from the arrangement. It’s really well done, and sounds pretty much radio ready. My only critique is the drums sound a bit canned. I dunno if they need a touch more reverb to match the other instruments or what. Actually, yeah I think that’s it, and a touch more on the vox too so it sounds less like it’s sitting on top of the orchestration.

Right from the beginning this song grabs me. I like the lyrics a lot but “sink or swim” seems to be an afterthought. This could easily be called something else. I really like your voice and the musical arrangement is well executed. This is very polished.