HeuristicsInc
Forum posti like how you worked brand names into the lyrics. And the whoas in the chorus are pretty great. I like the spoken asides but you might want to work on making them more in the same sonic space as the other vocals.
Challenge
Use of Line Cliche
Line cliche part is done over a C and G chord respectively in the verse on a high electric guitar on top of the rhythm guitar;
one additional portion of line cliche in the bridge for good measure where the bass is holding a long note (I think it's an A but darned if I remember now, might be G#) underneath a descending guitar line.
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MechaKarp
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Crush Season
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V1
I saw you looking over, across the frito lays
Past the cooler ranch, beside the lottery display
Behind the hottest pockets, through the looking glass
It's a chemical reaction, my heart is beating fast
PCH
And oh it's such a rush
when I chug that Orange Crush
CH
My teeth have shrunk to tiny orange pebbles (wa oh, wa oh oh oh)
My dentist is in therapy, cuz I'm such a soda rebel
My smile, an amber glow, and by now you know
I don't need a reason
Cuz it's crush season
V2
We've had our share of strife, I dated a vegan acrobat
She said that orange #5 was made from donkey fat (are you SURE that's an animal product??)
Next a cardiologist declared my heart would soon explode
Well the joke's gonna be on her, I've got an extra one of those (DUDE, that's KIDNEYS)
PCH
And oh it's such a rush
when I chug that Orange Crush
CH
My teeth have shrunk to tiny orange pebbles (wa oh, wa oh oh oh)
My dentist is in therapy, cuz I'm such a soda rebel
My smile, an amber glow, and by now you know [[chops]]
I don't need a reason
Cuz it's crush season
BR descending semitones
Tangerine dreams, in the future we're together
Growing old, sipping life through my neon Orange dentures
[Solo?]
CH (Double chorus outtro?)
My teeth have shrunk to tiny orange pebbles (wa oh, wa oh)
My dentist is in therapy, cuz I'm such a soda rebel
My smile, an amber glow, and I'm sure you know
I don't need a reason
I don't need a reason
My teeth shrunk to tiny orange pebbles (wa oh, wa oh).
My dentist is in therapy, cuz I'm such a soda rebel
My smile, an amber glow, and I'm sure you know
I don't need a reason
I don't need a reason
I don't need a reason
Cuz it's crush season