NUR EIN
about 15 years agopassed
2:59

Challenge

Must be educational.

Bram Tant - First Blood

Existence is pointless
Existence is pain
So it seems to me
Life is but shame

I don't know what to do
I don't know what to feel
It seems impossible
To know what is real

When I draw first blood
It aches so delightfully
As the blood drips down
And hurt becomes my reality

Slowly I fade away
As my consciousness slips
And a burning sensation
Is all that remains

Suddenly I'm somewhere else
In a place of life
Somewhere I can be
Somewhere I can live

And as I enjoy
All the good of this world
I realize
I'm gone once again

I wake up
In a puddle of my own blood
It was only a dream
Everything's the same

JonPorobil

Forum post

Please please please check your recording levels and your mix. Your guitar is clipping, resulting in unintentional distortion, and your vocals are wayy too low. I couldn't even hear the words.